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 Die Happy issues:

Toys R Us is closed. This could be set in the past, or possibly Canada, or I could replace Toys R Us as Halle's day job and come up with new jokes.

I do now have a different perspective on people who are in their late 20s and intending to be roommates indefinitely. Like, I used to be confused about why people wondered if they were together, but it's... very Dan & Phil? It seems like I was going for something I relate to, and I think if they're together it might make things feel more ridiculous, but I'm not sure exactly what's best for the story.
-- Maybe Sandra can afford her own place with the promotion. Maybe she's choosing between staying at her job, which would let her move out, and quitting it, which puts them both in financial risk. But Halle's not cool with either. I'm not sure how it would fit. Halle currently doesn't want her to quit, because it'll be financially tough for both of them. 

The slap-happy scene doesn't work. I don't know how to get them slap-happy.

We need to know that Sandra's interested in early childhood education way earlier.